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Olivia
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A Fantasy novel
olivia
book
Since I'm on here I might as'well write like I usually do..so here is how its gonna go...try to keep up!
~[Insert Book Name]~
-To start off-
There is 8 'realms' planes of existence in which all things are on. The 'realms' are woven together like a Blanket, now, each realm as a domain (excluding the 7th) in which all beings/things are in likeness or similar. Each is connected to the other through 'conduits' or spirits or as I will be naming them: Kinse<(subject to change) spirits whom were selected by higher powers(..defined in a later part.) But in their supreme wisdom the Gods<(subject to name change) set the 'kinse' to work in the world building up their chosen Domain(element..realm) building up great cities and empires. The Kinse are basically spirits but upon taking a phsyical form are subject to the weaknesses of mortality until their death(They don't essentially die, they're just returned to the flow of 'magic') As beings of pure 'magic' they have no real choice in the way things are as they follow a set path by the Gods. To spite this, they are in-fact physical during certain periods..which as you can guess gains them certain 'pleasures' making half-breeds. Essentially half mortal half magic; They are by far the strongest free beings in the entire book and their ability/strength/power shapes the entire story and is the reason for it essentially.
-The Drive-
Of late [insert world name here] has been fluxing in such a way that it cannot be repaired, worlds collapse upon each other, combining, crushing, burning, smashing into one another, seas mixing with fire, darkness with lights. Its upon this dark time that a hero arises to calm the chaos and find the reason for this great problem that is plaguing all realms, and will likely end in all of their ruin.
-Of Magic-
I'll be finding a new 'name' for the magic as magic is a poor word. I'll be taking concepts from other things I've read, and history and morphing it into my own creation. The basics of magic will be this
Magic requires the ability to tap into the 'weave' or plane energy that links all the worlds together. Essentially if one can 'tap into the world' they can move as they will, anywhere between planes. The problem with this is the 'Kinse' are directly connected to this 'weave' of magic and are literally able to feel a disruption or difference. Magic is done by constructing 'runes'(rename them later.) which are done by using a 'tool' with a type of ink(..a source of power..) and drawing it on and place or substance. Every stroke if done correctly can can do great things. The problem is NO ONE knows all the runes excluding the 'Gods' and drawing one incorrectly or possibly 'wording' something poorly in the language can literally get you killed. Such as 'A green ball bounced' sounds simple right? but if it is intrepid different by 'magic' it could be a 'unfinished' sentence of Magic it could say: "A green ball bounced into her head smashing it to pieces." As such I should note 'magic' is a living breathing thing it is the entire world it is everything in it.
Now that I've written your eyes off I'll add more to this later.
don't forget the bewbs
Good job though... yeah, good job!!
( aren't you afraid of someone stealing your ideas??? )
this is my reality
they will be there
Seriously, it worked for J R.R Tolkien and George R.R Martin.
Btw Olivia, this is your audience.
Oh. My. God.
What have I become ???
I'm not going to give you all the information.
Oh, I get you.
as in maybe these people can control the dark matter and dark energy that is all around us,,but WE cant detect....maybe they can and have learned to harness it.
or maybe being able to control atoms with thought. using then to form whatever molecule they want, then bind those, an infinitum, until you have constructed a chain around your "opponent"
controlling light by controlling photons. you could make any illusion you want. as some guy is giving you a hassle,,,you tell him house is on fire and it "Looks" like it is, cayse you are controlling the photons to look like a fire
also i REALLY thin you should have "will to power" magic....that is when you want a spell to happen does.
runes are more of a ritual thing. not a in the moment thing
what ya think?
if you like i could get much more detail
Welcome and good luck.
well i would be glad to offer more ideas. even the best witters have people read their stuff and give them ideas.
nondisclosure is no problem. i have had to do those for many companies.
you should get on irc so that we can talk in private.
I'm sorry I was grumpy as fuck that day. I feel super bad :(