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As she slid up and down his pole she considered poles in general.
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No treat we make in these words - but a warmth shallow in the gut and spleen. Attempting a word hunt but finding a diatribe of inner force in discourse about content destructive and demeaning. Ignore this, place the hand on the leg, place the hand on the leg near the slow waking cunt. Today I shall walk the dog, but I do not - but feed it and consider the pizza in the freezer as I crack a beer never really there, never really a beer anymore - just a distraction from the action of the soul.
We are taught not to weep at beauty, not to show a deep emotion - a emotion born of simple, good things. It has to be important we are taught - it has to have a meaning - for it to mean anything at all. I stop by the side of the road and watch a bird land swiftly onto a branch as the sunrise gilds it wings and it calls out to the new day.
I write a destruction of myself - self willing the lesser needs at the cost of the greater - the greater - a grandmother remembers as a tear wells but does not fall - as her children and grandchildren look on as she fades into the light.
Remember these words for they are not written in vain - but a moment - a place, in the dead mans name.
- DMP
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Different strokes for different folks - the word 'an' always seemd like context masturbation.
[quote user=Brig] Time to join Nova and Ed for a booze up.
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Time to be brig I observe...
Different strokes for different folks - the word 'an' always seemd like context masturbation.
Time to be brig I observe...
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i use ellipsis a lot in what ever write or type... whats bad is that i usually use the comma instead of the period
but your use of the em Dash...and it being the - (minus) sign does the same thing to me...instead of using the real em dash —
i know it is a pain in the butt, and you may be like me, cause i dont worry about capital letters or apostrophes in most anything i type up. however, i do try to follow most grammatical rules and try to use the proper punctuation.
I have dysgraphia and so i had to really drill grammar into my head
but if you are gonna post something and as well versed as you are, it is like nails on a chalk board when i hit a mistake.
you need an editor
Anne McCaffrey said that "all writers can't wright" as in that the ones that do write are going to constantly mess up
i use ellipsis a lot in what ever write or type... whats bad is that i usually use the comma instead of the period
but your use of the em Dash...and it being the - (minus) sign does the same thing to me...instead of using the real em dash —
i know it is a pain in the butt, and you may be like me, cause i dont worry about capital letters or apostrophes in most anything i type up. however, i do try to follow most grammatical rules and try to use the proper punctuation.
I have dysgraphia and so i had to really drill grammar into my head
but if you are gonna post something and as well versed as you are, it is like nails on a chalk board when i hit a mistake.
you need an editor
Anne McCaffrey said that "all writers can't wright" as in that the ones that do write are going to constantly mess up